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The Introduction text is written I was not satisfied with this introduction. I am still not satisfied with this introduction.
This is a good introduction. Though it could do better, I am not dissatisfied with the way it turned out as a whole. It does its job as an introductory text and starts an article off on a good foot. There are no real negatives to note towards it, but I cannot say anything positive about it either because there's really nothing noteworthy about the piece of writing from my perspective as a reader or a writer. Not enough emotion or elaboration is given to this introduction. I feel like the explanation of the influence of the first game held by White Fox could be longer, better developed, and more detailed. The text seems kind of dry and dull because of how it's written. It doesn't really grab my attention aside from the reference to the original game made within it. You don't need to go into excessive detail about anything aside from explaining why you're actually writing the article in the first place, but that information is not included in this piece of writing at all aside from a tiny bit towards its end where it mentions what will be elaborated on later in the article. While it's fine to not include everything you plan to talk about in the introduction, it's important that the majority of what you do include is at least slightly interesting on some level so as to actually start off an article on a good foot. Otherwise, readers will find little incentive to continue reading past this point. To me, the first introduction seems like it would be more at home within an encyclopedia than within an encyclopedia. I don't think there is any need for this kind of writing style when writing an article of any kind on Wikipedia. I'm not entirely sure what the author is trying to accomplish with this particular introduction. It seems like it's trying to be informative, but it doesn't really seem to have enough information about the subject matter to be worthy of its own article. It does seem kind of bland and boring, though that may just be because I'm not familiar with this franchise in question. Given all of that, I can't really say what I think about it without knowing the details of what the author tried to achieve with it first.
This introduction wasn't really interesting or informative enough for me as a reader. It fails to grab my attention because it doesn't seem to have enough to offer me as a reader so as to actually want me to read the rest of this article. It seems kind of generic and bland, which isn't necessarily a bad thing since it's not trying to impose itself as part of any specific tone or style. However, generic and bland is still generic and bland and is not really that desirable in an introduction. It's also relatively short, which makes me feel like there is no reason for me to continue reading past this point since I know I won't be able to find sufficient information about the subject matter at hand here.
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